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    In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:32 pm

    Here, Just talk about what's going on in the clearing. Yes, the nettle clump, high rock, and stuff that is not a den is part or the crearing.


    REMEMBER: Use proper Rping tecniques and good grammar. Put quotes so we know when someone's talking --"bla bla" said the cat-- and also, use (and) when it's YOU talking out of rp. Thanks!

    PS. try to use big writing like this one :)it would help alot.

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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:37 pm

    why don't you like me? i was your apprentice
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:40 pm

    ((Morgan!!! Use these! "".

    Did you even read this part:

    Use proper Rping tecniques and good grammar. Put quotes so we know when someone's talking --"bla bla" said the cat-- and also, use (and) when it's YOU talking out of rp. Thanks! ))

    I (Spottedpelt) padded across the crearing to the fresh kill pile. It was pittifully small.
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:42 pm

    "spottedpelt look into my eyes, what do you see"?
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    Post by Bluekit on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:44 pm

    "I know your busy but just tell me what you see"
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:46 pm

    ((please try to put more into a post so we don't wast space please. And make it more descriptive. Please and thank you. Smile))

    Spottedpelt looked into the young warrior's blue eyes. For a second she got lost, but then she stood straight. "I see a traitor." she scowled to his face. A breeze moved her beautiful pelt and she growled at hawkfrost.

    (now you try Smile))
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:47 pm

    I crouched down beside you and picked out a vole and began to eat
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:49 pm

    "that's not what you see you just don't like me because of my father. If you were a true member of fernclan that cared about all the cats in this clan you would see who I really am"
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:53 pm

    (sabby whats taking so long)" you can't see me as a traitor, I know you to well you started to hate me when i was a warrior"
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Mon Nov 17, 2008 5:58 pm

    ((See, just add those two posts together next time okay? Smile And after he says something, add a little something extra like:

    "that's not what you see you just don't like me because of my father. If you were a true member of fernclan that cared about all the cats in this clan you would see who I really am" he mumbled and bent to eat the vole. Sadness welled up inside him, but also anger. ))


    I stared at him. "If you're calling me disloyal you better stop," I growled, my fur starting to bristle. Then I quickly stopped myself. "I care about my cats, my clan and the code. I just think that you don't. That's why i'm doing this. You can't prove yourself." I said watching him eat away at the little food we had.
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Mon Nov 17, 2008 6:02 pm

    ((okay I posted!!))
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 1:51 pm

    "who says I can't prove myself" he growled with the most anger spottedpelt ever heard. "you call me a traitor? listen to yourself your the only cat in this clan who says I'm a traitor" I said even more angry than before. you were even starting to doubt that you should've even said your words.
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    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:01 pm

    barring his teeth at spottedpelt he trotted off in the other direction. now I'm hunting at snake trees.
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    Post by Cinderpool on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:08 pm

    Spottedpelt hissed as he walked away. "Mouse skull!!" she spat in an annoyed tone. "Yah! Go off and prance around in Fireclan territory! I'll make sure they know what a foul cat you are!" she said throwing the unfinnished vole behind him.
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    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:12 pm

    I whipped aroud it seemed as though I was about to claw your face but I didn't instead I crouched beside you again. "I'm not a FIRECLAN cat I'm a fernclan cat well at least one of us is" I spat.
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:17 pm

    ( just hurry)
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    Post by Cinderpool on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:19 pm

    I hissed in fury. Every hair on my pelt bristled. I hissed again and my claws kneaded the dirt. "You piece of crowfood wouldn't know anything about being a Fernclan cat. You accepted this horrible name with open paws! How could a cat look up to you? How can you look up to yourself?" I asked with more sadness than anger. "I expected you to grow into a wise warrior. One who never lets go of our ansestors...the past." I said gently, sadness clouding my amber eyes. I leaped away out of the camp.
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    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:22 pm

    " oh, spottedpelt. what am I going to do with you?" I said in a whisper.
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:25 pm

    (( ok now YOU post))
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:27 pm

    ((LOL.))

    I leaped out of camp and all the way out, heading to the stream. Once I got there, I sat down and neatly tucked my tail over my paws. I looked into the stream for a long time. I wished to pray to Starclan but I knew I was not one blessed like Firestar, destined to be a leader, dreaming of Starclan long before he was a warrior. No, I, was just a cat with her own problems, who could not seek the help of Starclan. I scented pray all around me, but didn't move.
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:28 pm

    ((Please don't do that. It wasted space. Just rp.))
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:33 pm

    I sat outside waiting for you to come back. I needed to talk to you without hissing and growling. I waited while all the other cats slept I waited for many hours untill my eyes started to hurt.
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    Post by Cinderpool on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:36 pm

    Finally I drank some water. The sun had set, and I knew I couldn't stay here all night. I wouldn't have enough strength to serve my clan in the morning. I got up and groomed a bit, to shake the leaves off. I stretched and padded back to camp. I came through the gorse tunnel and stepped into the clearing.
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Bluekit on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:38 pm

    I was sitting right in the middle with a plump rabbit I caught myself and I nuged it towards you untill it was right at your paws. the smell was so tempting you just couldn't resist. "I caught it myself. we need to talk without a war".
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    Re: In the clearing

    Post by Cinderpool on Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:42 pm

    ((You can't control me! Go read the rules. If I say : I put the rabbit at Hawkfrost's feet.Hit eyes her tired, and he was hungry....That's like controlling my character. don't do that please.))

    I looked at the rabbit. I was very hungry, but I knew I couldn't eat that all. "No thank you." I mewed, and brushed past him.

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